[book, admin] include some fixes done by auc in an email to me
authorSylvain Thénault <sylvain.thenault@logilab.fr>
Thu, 07 Jul 2011 18:20:46 +0200
changeset 7633 ab1385ee7caa
parent 7632 3c9dfc6e820b
child 7634 c75a46918933
[book, admin] include some fixes done by auc in an email to me
doc/book/en/admin/setup-windows.rst
doc/book/en/admin/setup.rst
--- a/doc/book/en/admin/setup-windows.rst	Thu Jul 07 18:20:23 2011 +0200
+++ b/doc/book/en/admin/setup-windows.rst	Thu Jul 07 18:20:46 2011 +0200
@@ -8,13 +8,12 @@
 Setting up a Windows development environment is not too complicated
 but it requires a series of small steps.
 
-We proposed an example of a typical |cubicweb| installation on Windows
+We propose an example of a typical |cubicweb| installation on Windows
 from sources. We assume everything goes into ``C:\\`` and for any
 package, without version specification, "the latest is
 the greatest".
 
-Take into the mind that adjusting the installation drive should be
-straightforward.
+Mind that adjusting the installation drive should be straightforward.
 
 
 
@@ -104,7 +103,7 @@
 Getting the sources
 -------------------
 
-There are tow ways to get the sources of |cubicweb| and its
+There are two ways to get the sources of |cubicweb| and its
 :ref:`cubes <AvailableCubes>`:
 
 * download the latest release (:ref:`SourceInstallation`)
@@ -153,3 +152,6 @@
 Then start the service with::
 
   net start cubicweb-my_instance
+
+In case this does not work, you should be able to see error reports in
+the application log, using the windows event log viewer.
--- a/doc/book/en/admin/setup.rst	Thu Jul 07 18:20:23 2011 +0200
+++ b/doc/book/en/admin/setup.rst	Thu Jul 07 18:20:46 2011 +0200
@@ -91,10 +91,10 @@
   :ref:`cubicweb with other database <DatabaseInstallation>` using the following
   virtual packages :
 
-  * `cubicweb-postgresql-support` contains the necessary dependency for
+  * `cubicweb-postgresql-support` contains the necessary dependencies for
     using :ref:`cubicweb with postgresql datatabase <PostgresqlConfiguration>`
 
-  * `cubicweb-mysql-support` contains the necessary dependency for using
+  * `cubicweb-mysql-support` contains the necessary dependencies for using
     :ref:`cubicweb with mysql database <MySqlConfiguration>`.
 
 .. _`list of sources`: http://wiki.debian.org/SourcesList