# HG changeset patch
# User Patrick Mezard <patrick@mezard.eu>
# Date 1341767887 -7200
# Node ID 631cdf4295bc3dd2d2d96940b88b195024e08c09
# Parent  f4302a2079f4c319c441e9f8596ec1194ee743e6
docs: improve recent updates

diff -r f4302a2079f4 -r 631cdf4295bc docs/evolve-faq.rst
--- a/docs/evolve-faq.rst	Sun Jul 08 19:02:36 2012 +0200
+++ b/docs/evolve-faq.rst	Sun Jul 08 19:18:07 2012 +0200
@@ -96,9 +96,9 @@
 Getting changes out of a commit
 ------------------------------------------------------------
 
-the ``hg uncommit`` commands allow you to rewrite the current commit to not
-include change for some file. The content of target files are not altered on
-disk and back as "modified"::
+The ``hg uncommit`` command lets you rewrite the parent commit without
+selected changed files. Target files content is not altered and
+appears again as "modified"::
 
   $ hg st
   M babar
@@ -112,11 +112,10 @@
 Split a changeset
 -----------------------
 
-I you just want to split whole file, you can just use the ``uncommit`` command.
-
+To split on file boundaries, just use ``uncommit`` command.
 
-If you need fine grained split, there is no official command for that yet.
-However is it easily achieved by manual operation::
+There is no official command yet to split at a finer granularity. One
+way to achieve this is::
 
   ### you want to split changeset A: 42
   # update to A parent
@@ -188,7 +187,7 @@
 Export to mq: ``synchronize``
 ------------------------------------------------------------
 
-Another extension allows to export. you changes to mq
+Another extension lets you export your changes to mq.
 
 View diff from the last amend
 ------------------------------------------------------------
@@ -223,8 +222,8 @@
 
 Extinct changesets are hidden using the *hidden* feature of mercurial.
 
-Only ``hg log`` and ``hgview`` support it. ``hg glog`` Only support that since
-2.2. Other visual viewer don't.
+Only ``hg log``, ``hg glog`` and ``hgview`` support it, other
+graphical viewer do not.
 
 
 
diff -r f4302a2079f4 -r 631cdf4295bc docs/from-mq.rst
--- a/docs/from-mq.rst	Sun Jul 08 19:02:36 2012 +0200
+++ b/docs/from-mq.rst	Sun Jul 08 19:18:07 2012 +0200
@@ -85,7 +85,7 @@
 hg qref -X
 ````````````
 
-To remove change from you current commit use::
+To remove changes from you current commit use::
 
   $ hg uncommit not-ready.txt