--- a/docs/from-mq.rst	Thu Jan 24 18:02:00 2013 -0500
+++ b/docs/from-mq.rst	Thu Jan 24 18:05:59 2013 -0500
@@ -39,7 +39,7 @@
 phase revset to display unfinished work only, and use templates to have
 the same kind of compact that the output of qseries has.
 
-This will result in something like that::
+This will result in something like::
 
   [alias]
   wip = log -r 'not public()' --template='{rev}:{node|short} {desc|firstline}\n'
@@ -49,7 +49,7 @@
 
 With evolve you handle standard changesets without an additional overlay.
 
-Standard changeset are created using hg commit as usual.::
+Standard changeset are created using hg commit as usual::
 
   $ hg commit
 
@@ -57,7 +57,7 @@
 set your changeset in the secret phase using the phase command.
 
 Note that you only need it for the first commit you want to be secret. Later
-commits will inherit their parents phase.
+commits will inherit their parent's phase.
 
 If you always want your new commit to be in the secret phase, your should
 consider updating your configuration:
@@ -92,7 +92,7 @@
 hg qref --exclude
 `````````````````````
 
-To remove changes from you current commit use::
+To remove changes from your current commit use::
 
   $ hg uncommit not-ready.txt
 
@@ -100,7 +100,7 @@
 hg qpop
 `````````
 
-The following command emulate the behavior of hg qpop:
+The following command emulates the behavior of hg qpop:
 
   $ hg gdown
 
@@ -108,8 +108,8 @@
 
   $ hg update
 
-.. note:: gdown and update allow movement with working directory changes applied
-          and gracefully merge them.
+.. note:: gdown and update allow movement with working directory
+          changes applied, and gracefully merge them.
 
 hg qpush
 ````````
@@ -153,15 +153,15 @@
 hg qdiff
 `````````
 
-``pdiff`` is an alias for `hg diff -r .^` it works as qdiff, but outside mq.
+``pdiff`` is an alias for `hg diff -r .^` It works like qdiff, but outside MQ.
 
 
 
 hg qfinish and hg qimport
 ````````````````````````````
 
-These are not necessary anymore. If you want to control exchange and
-mutability of changesets, see the phase feature
+These are not necessary anymore. If you want to control the
+mutability of changesets, see the phase feature.