--- a/doc/book/en/intro/tutorial/conclusion.rst	Tue Jul 28 19:59:50 2009 +0200
+++ b/doc/book/en/intro/tutorial/conclusion.rst	Tue Jul 28 20:26:45 2009 +0200
@@ -3,15 +3,13 @@
 What's next?
 ------------
 
-We demonstrated how from a straight out of the box *CubicWeb*
-installation, you can build your web-application based on a
-schema. It's all already there: views, templates, permissions,
-etc. The step forward is now for you to customize according
-to your needs.
+We demonstrated how from a straight out of the box *CubicWeb* installation, you
+can build your web application based on a data model. It's all already there:
+views, templates, permissions, etc. The step forward is now for you to customize
+according to your needs.
 
-More than a web application, many features are available to
-extend your application, for example: RSS channel integration
-(:ref:`rss`), hooks (:ref:`hooks`), support of sources such as
-Google App Engine (:ref:`gaecontents`) and lots of others to
-discover through our book.
+Many features are available to extend your application, for example: RSS channel
+integration (:ref:`rss`), hooks (:ref:`hooks`), support of sources such as
+Google App Engine (:ref:`gaecontents`) and lots of others to discover through
+our book.