doc/book/en/tutorials/base/index.rst
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parent 6835 87e2641d75f7
child 6876 4b0b9d8207c5
--- a/doc/book/en/tutorials/base/index.rst	Mon Jan 17 13:36:18 2011 +0100
+++ b/doc/book/en/tutorials/base/index.rst	Mon Jan 17 15:45:26 2011 +0100
@@ -10,13 +10,13 @@
 
 
 This tutorial is designed to help in your very first steps to start with
-|cubicweb|. We will glance through basic concepts such as:
+|cubicweb|. We will tour through basic concepts such as:
 
-* having an application running by using existing components
+* getting an application running by using existing components
 * discovering the default user interface
-* basically extending and customizing the look and feel of that application
+* basic extending and customizing the look and feel of that application
 
-More advanced concepts will covered in :ref:`advanced_tutorial`.
+More advanced concepts are covered in :ref:`advanced_tutorial`.
 
 
 .. _TutosBaseVocab:
@@ -32,10 +32,10 @@
   and a set of views to display them. A cube can be built by assembling other
   cubes;
 
-* an `instance` is a specific installation of one more more cubes and includes
+* an `instance` is a specific installation of one or more cubes and includes
   configuration files, a web server and a database.
 
-Reading :ref:`Concepts` for more vocabulary will be a must do at some point.
+Reading :ref:`Concepts` for more vocabulary will be required at some point.
 
 Now, let's start the hot stuff!